nightshift

[tectak]

bats fly around in the darkYes, they do
moths hang around street lightYes, they do

cats on the prowlYes, they do
dog barking in the yardYes,they do

block of flats windows litYes. They're home
cars sitting waiting outsideYes. They do that

mobile makes a buzzYes. It means a call. Mine does that
rain hitting bus stopAh! Now we are getting all poetic. Can I cope?:)

midnight bus arrivesIs it that time already?
seats empty of livesClumsy structure but not surprising in a sentence of this complexity. God, I hate myself sometimes. Save me, rowens:)

be home soon
grab a bite to eatHypo-glycaemia, methinks
Hi, ( Note! These comments made whilst this piece was in the original location...SERIOUS CRIT)
This is genre, I guess. It is, though, nothing more than a list when all is said and done. It reads like notes for a bigger thing. Sometimes the effort put into writing a piece reflects on the effort the critic puts in.
Best,
tectak

Oh,shit. There is more. must have been the line breaks that fooled me.
close the blinds curtains
keep the darkness in Yes. It does.
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