Insomnia
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The worms resurface, yet again,
In dark recesses of my brain.
Madness reigns in the dead of night,
The worms feed on lack of light.
Shine a torch into my eyes,
murder me with sheer surprise..
But kill the worms, that creep, and creep..
I'm not awake, yet not asleep.

I would really appreciate your critique, be honest! Smile
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Insomnia - by Gemma - 03-05-2013, 12:02 PM
RE: Insomnia - by billy - 03-05-2013, 06:46 PM
RE: Insomnia - by neb123 - 03-06-2013, 05:23 AM
RE: Insomnia - by Aphroditeny - 03-09-2013, 09:07 AM



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