The Mask

[Gemma]

Take off your mask,
It's wearing thin.
Immutable, and ever still..
It shrouds a storm that brews within.

I have an umbrella, I have warm clothes,
I'll brave the tempest when it shows...
However harsh the element revealed,
T'will be greeted more than a mind concealed.

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