Lie Dead (Edit 1 TOMH, italics by goldyfish)

[billy]

yeah, i'm here till the 17th, then i'm back to the philippines.

I'm more than positive others will enjoy the ending and i can see after the reply why you have it. on that basis alone the last stanza is worth keeping. like i said, the answers are okay
i do like the altered refrain you have at play, i bet it would sound gloriously calming in a soft scots accent