03-05-2013, 12:49 AM
Quite a visual poem. Thanks for sharing, saeity. Maybe I'd eliminate hung from the simile with the bathrobe...Just for less repetition. I like the feel of the first two stanzas in particular...the flow.
|
Hung Up and Dry - revision
|
|
« Next Oldest | Next Newest »
|
| Messages In This Thread |
|
Hung Up and Dry - revision - by saeity - 03-04-2013, 09:16 AM
RE: Hung Up and Dry - by neb123 - 03-05-2013, 12:49 AM
RE: Hung Up and Dry - by billy - 03-05-2013, 02:17 AM
RE: Hung Up and Dry - revision - by saeity - 03-08-2013, 02:54 AM
RE: Hung Up and Dry - revision - by billy - 03-09-2013, 06:09 PM
|
Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)