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tectak
saeity.
[/quote' Wrote: Hi saeity,
You are a pleasure to crit
I do hope you were not offended in ANY way by my calls on your poem. There is no other way to say some things other than with a dash of good humour. Please, do NOT let this piece languish. Revise it. That is what workshopping is all about. Remember, too, that (almost) all is opinion. Take from crit all that you can live with and jettison the rest.....but do not throw out the baby with the bathwater. Nurture it and let it grow.
Best,
tectak
Absolutely no offence taken
I'm here to learn. As for the piece maybe I'll let it stew. Now that's poem two done I think number three of at least three hundred wants to be heard lol. Once again, thanks, it really, really is appreciated
saeity.
