Popeye, cheers mate -- accuracy isn't something I aim for, but you've got one hell of a good general sense of what's going on and that's better than good enough for me!
Tom, the culverts: I want the idea that they appear to be clearing the way, but in fact their purpose for being placed was to trap. Not entirely sure how to get that across. And how does a window devolve into a slug? Is there a glass shortage in England that I don't know about? Is this some EU environmental imperative?
Jae, I did have the powder in mind -- physical impossibility? Probably
Many thanks for your insightful comments.
Tom, the culverts: I want the idea that they appear to be clearing the way, but in fact their purpose for being placed was to trap. Not entirely sure how to get that across. And how does a window devolve into a slug? Is there a glass shortage in England that I don't know about? Is this some EU environmental imperative?
Jae, I did have the powder in mind -- physical impossibility? Probably
Many thanks for your insightful comments.
It could be worse