Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon
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Fantastic title Brandon. I might suggest on L4 "to the night's sworn secrecy" and cut vague. You can develop this one. My move is decided. I'll have the poem up hopefully later tonight.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 02-24-2013, 11:45 AM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 02-25-2013, 08:41 AM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-03-2013, 01:56 PM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-04-2013, 03:59 AM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-04-2013, 10:01 PM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-05-2013, 01:38 AM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-06-2013, 04:56 AM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-11-2013, 12:10 PM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-12-2013, 11:21 PM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-15-2013, 06:09 AM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-23-2013, 05:42 AM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-26-2013, 06:35 PM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-26-2013, 08:35 PM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-30-2013, 11:54 PM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 04-01-2013, 03:17 AM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 04-01-2013, 09:10 AM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 04-01-2013, 12:35 PM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 04-03-2013, 01:08 PM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by billy - 04-03-2013, 04:11 PM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 04-03-2013, 06:33 PM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 04-16-2013, 07:04 AM



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