03-04-2013, 12:25 AM
The second and third stanzas are beautiful, but I'm not a fan of the first one. I feel that just the second and the third stanzas by themselves just read better.
Black Swan
Nc6
Candle flame;
dancer in the spotlight.
She departed,
the night swore secrecy,
leaving only smoky vague trails
for personal reasons.
Black Swan
Nc6
Candle flame;
dancer in the spotlight.
She departed,
the night swore secrecy,
leaving only smoky vague trails
for personal reasons.
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