03-03-2013, 11:38 PM
[quote='Olweseregon' pid='117954' dateline='1362244678']
One candle
Flickers in the night
No one heard
The sound
Of the candle dying out -- The poem as a whole feels a little too stiff. I'd try rewording it, but it's so short I'm scared of changing it too much.
One candle
Flickers in the night
No one heard
The sound
Of the candle dying out -- The poem as a whole feels a little too stiff. I'd try rewording it, but it's so short I'm scared of changing it too much.
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