03-03-2013, 07:03 AM
Is it still your work then? Look at my poem where you earlier suggested to change a line and I had to agree ( the black hole line).
But the line is your's, not mine. (title too, as you know). So I feel almost forced to name you (in that case) bc I do not steal, comes it to poetry. Maybe I think wrongly. I do enjoy (non-ad hominem feedback) but still I am the artist (learning still).
What I like best is, when a critic points out deficiences (like you did with my Gallagher poem). I accept the critique and rewrite, but it is my rewrite.
Hm.
whatever ,-)
need a beer now. Is it me complicating things?
But the line is your's, not mine. (title too, as you know). So I feel almost forced to name you (in that case) bc I do not steal, comes it to poetry. Maybe I think wrongly. I do enjoy (non-ad hominem feedback) but still I am the artist (learning still).
What I like best is, when a critic points out deficiences (like you did with my Gallagher poem). I accept the critique and rewrite, but it is my rewrite.
Hm.
whatever ,-)
need a beer now. Is it me complicating things?