Leanne, the with is a nice call out, and I'll fix it. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem--nothing to be sorry about. I appreciate your reaction.
Hi goldy, thanks for the read. The school bus is an interesting idea. I'll give all your comments some thought. Thank you for your words. I appreciate them.
Hi Shem, it's the little things. So, let me give the of/at some thought. Everything helps.
Thank you.
Hi goldy, thanks for the read. The school bus is an interesting idea. I'll give all your comments some thought. Thank you for your words. I appreciate them.
Hi Shem, it's the little things. So, let me give the of/at some thought. Everything helps.
Thank you.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson