03-03-2013, 12:21 AM
I second the seconders (including Tom ,-)). I am with Leanne on line breaks and longer lines absolutely.
I am not too fond of the title because I think the poem is much better than the title. Just me.
Enjoyed the read a lot.
I am not too fond of the title because I think the poem is much better than the title. Just me.
Enjoyed the read a lot.
