Cliffs

[jmmc137]

I like the poem, lots of interesting ideas. it does seem a little choppy though, stanzas and developing or deleting ideas could help.
also, I think you could develop leafless, from the comments there seems to be a double meaning in it, both of which are cool images.

but can you explain the last line? I don't really see what you mean.

Conscience is an inner feeling or voice viewed as acting as a guide to the rightness or wrongness of one's behavior; something the subject in the poem didn't have before.