03-01-2013, 03:56 AM
(02-28-2013, 03:01 AM)cidermaid Wrote: Love the simplicity of this.Ooo I like the idea, I will have a go at that thanks and thank you for nice words. K
Looking at the small /UN noticed things in life is a bit of a thing for me so this really worked for me in terms of subject.
I know this is not Ness for crit but I kind of want to flip the first stanza on its head.
and read from top to bottom. Prob a daft suggestion
As ever you offer something original and fun to read thanks. AJ
(02-27-2013, 01:24 PM)shemthepenman Wrote: this is great. simple little idea and well executed...Thanks for your comment much appreciated. K
...oh, just read this again and it caught me by surprise just how much I really really enjoy this poem... thanks for the read.
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out