02-28-2013, 03:01 AM
Love the simplicity of this.
Looking at the small /UN noticed things in life is a bit of a thing for me so this really worked for me in terms of subject.
I know this is not Ness for crit but I kind of want to flip the first stanza on its head.
and read from top to bottom. Prob a daft suggestion
As ever you offer something original and fun to read thanks. AJ
Looking at the small /UN noticed things in life is a bit of a thing for me so this really worked for me in terms of subject.
I know this is not Ness for crit but I kind of want to flip the first stanza on its head.
and read from top to bottom. Prob a daft suggestion
As ever you offer something original and fun to read thanks. AJ