Sorrow's rain

[LovePhantom]

From sadness clouds
falls sorrow's rain,
my feelings sprouts
reborn and drained.
Dead whereabouts
will now remain,
some silent shouts
of death from pain.

Is it: from sad clouds fall sorrowful rain? Is that the meaning you want?

And, do you mean: your feeling's sprouts, reborn and drained. I think you can use sprouts as a noun.

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feelings' sprouts

Ok... i kinda feel ashamed now... tried to do a step in english poetry but i am guessing my english knowledge is not enought!

From L1 and L2 what i wanna say is that i am crying out of pain (thats the message behind it), but the image i wanna picture is what u said more or less... from clouds that are sad, a rain of sorrow is falling.

About L3 and L4, what i want to say is that my feelings where just reborn but they died before being able to grow... so its like the sprouts of my feelings dried just after being reborn. So yes, its feeling's sprouts as u said

Thank you a lot!!

PS: sorry for all this grammar things... i will review next ones more intensely and ask some friends before posting (as word proved not to be an useful tool and i made kinda a fool of myself).