02-28-2013, 01:09 AM
From sadness clouds
falls sorrow's rain,
my feelings sprouts
reborn and drained.
Dead whereabouts
will now remain,
some silent shouts
of death from pain.
Is it: from sad clouds fall sorrowful rain? Is that the meaning you want?
And, do you mean: your feeling's sprouts, reborn and drained. I think you can use sprouts as a noun.
feelings' sprouts
falls sorrow's rain,
my feelings sprouts
reborn and drained.
Dead whereabouts
will now remain,
some silent shouts
of death from pain.
Is it: from sad clouds fall sorrowful rain? Is that the meaning you want?
And, do you mean: your feeling's sprouts, reborn and drained. I think you can use sprouts as a noun.
feelings' sprouts