Some Mothers do have em
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(02-26-2013, 03:41 AM)cidermaid Wrote:  congratulations...it's a baby!
I thought you had caught the essence of never-ending chores and delights of having a baby in the house well. Seems like you have covered just about all of the bits that i remember. Liked the bounce to the verse - bit like life it jogs along.
Thought this was sweet. Made me smile, thanks for the read.

AJ.
Thank you for the kind words, yes it's funny how the early years go so quick. Cheers K

(02-27-2013, 02:40 AM)newsclippings Wrote:  I like this. It's simple and kind of infuriatingly sweet.

one am, covered in sick, -- this line may have too many syllables, but that's really the only thing I have to say.
nice job.
Happy you found it sweetly infuriating, I will have a look at that line thanks. TOMH

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Messages In This Thread
Some Mothers do have em - by Keith - 02-24-2013, 04:06 AM
RE: Some Mothers do have em - by cidermaid - 02-26-2013, 03:41 AM
RE: Some Mothers do have em - by Keith - 02-27-2013, 08:01 AM
RE: Some Mothers do have em - by newsclippings - 02-27-2013, 02:40 AM
RE: Some Mothers do have em - by shemthepenman - 02-27-2013, 01:37 PM
RE: Some Mothers do have em - by Keith - 03-01-2013, 04:40 AM



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