02-27-2013, 08:01 AM
(02-26-2013, 03:41 AM)cidermaid Wrote: congratulations...it's a baby!Thank you for the kind words, yes it's funny how the early years go so quick. Cheers K
I thought you had caught the essence of never-ending chores and delights of having a baby in the house well. Seems like you have covered just about all of the bits that i remember. Liked the bounce to the verse - bit like life it jogs along.
Thought this was sweet. Made me smile, thanks for the read.
AJ.
(02-27-2013, 02:40 AM)newsclippings Wrote: I like this. It's simple and kind of infuriatingly sweet.Happy you found it sweetly infuriating, I will have a look at that line thanks. TOMH
one am, covered in sick, -- this line may have too many syllables, but that's really the only thing I have to say.
nice job.
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out

