02-26-2013, 10:59 PM
well on the whole Todd, my instant reaction is that you are right.
particularly about mixing these spurious emotions with the senses. Your suggestion adds wieght to the altered sensory inputs.
I can't use 'magician pulls time' anymore, simply because of my rigidity on using time twice so close together and I am also pleased with the 'ferns curl around time'. Perhaps the magician can pull minutes or hours? I am not sure. perhaps a rainbow, but then maybe prism will have to go...
I tried it out - somehow seems to be getting a religious leaning like that - I think to use Hokus Pokus in the woods as a new title, not sure if that will stop god appearing to me as a rainbow though. I don't want god to appear to me as a rainbow, not at this time.
mucking about aside - if you enjoyed, that is the main thing - so thanks.
particularly about mixing these spurious emotions with the senses. Your suggestion adds wieght to the altered sensory inputs.
I can't use 'magician pulls time' anymore, simply because of my rigidity on using time twice so close together and I am also pleased with the 'ferns curl around time'. Perhaps the magician can pull minutes or hours? I am not sure. perhaps a rainbow, but then maybe prism will have to go...
I tried it out - somehow seems to be getting a religious leaning like that - I think to use Hokus Pokus in the woods as a new title, not sure if that will stop god appearing to me as a rainbow though. I don't want god to appear to me as a rainbow, not at this time.
mucking about aside - if you enjoyed, that is the main thing - so thanks.