02-26-2013, 09:49 PM
ruby would love this poem,
i'm quite comfortable giving honest feedback on personal poems though it can be hard at times,
thanksfully i like all of this one. the 2nd line is a treat. it feels so comforting.
there's a good feel of family about the piece as well.
thanks for the read.
i'm quite comfortable giving honest feedback on personal poems though it can be hard at times,
thanksfully i like all of this one. the 2nd line is a treat. it feels so comforting.
there's a good feel of family about the piece as well.
thanks for the read.
