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this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it.

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02-26-2013, 05:02 PM

I hate to break it to you, but this is poetry. If it's not, it's one of the more poetic rants anyone's ever made Smile

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No critiquing, but it really hits me in the gut. You do raw, angry and despairing with great elegance.

It could be worse

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this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by newsclippings - 02-26-2013, 04:57 PM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by Leanne - 02-26-2013, 05:02 PM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by newsclippings - 02-26-2013, 05:14 PM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by billy - 02-26-2013, 08:39 PM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by Wildcard - 02-26-2013, 09:04 PM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by Todd - 02-26-2013, 09:13 PM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by rowens - 02-26-2013, 11:16 PM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by newsclippings - 02-27-2013, 02:22 AM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by rowens - 02-27-2013, 03:56 AM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by newsclippings - 02-27-2013, 05:23 AM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by newsclippings - 02-27-2013, 06:10 AM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by abu nuwas - 02-27-2013, 04:25 AM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by rowens - 02-27-2013, 05:42 AM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by rowens - 02-27-2013, 06:11 AM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by newsclippings - 02-27-2013, 06:12 AM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by shemthepenman - 02-27-2013, 06:17 AM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by billy - 02-27-2013, 10:54 PM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by rowens - 02-27-2013, 06:17 AM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by newsclippings - 02-27-2013, 07:10 AM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by rowens - 02-27-2013, 07:22 AM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by newsclippings - 02-27-2013, 07:30 AM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by rowens - 02-27-2013, 07:31 AM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by newsclippings - 02-27-2013, 11:45 AM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by rowens - 02-27-2013, 10:26 PM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by newsclippings - 02-28-2013, 05:48 AM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by rowens - 02-28-2013, 05:49 AM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by newsclippings - 02-28-2013, 06:19 AM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by rowens - 02-28-2013, 06:25 AM

RE: this is not poetry it's a rant, but this is the only safe place for it. - by Leanne - 02-28-2013, 06:37 AM

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