02-26-2013, 02:00 AM
Hi Coach,
Welcome to the site! Generally videos don't work well in the critique forums, because there's not much to critique. We mostly need the text. As it stands, I'm going to move this to a forum more in keeping with videos, and encourage you to bring the text back to us in an appropriate forum.
Nice to have you here.
Best,
Todd
Welcome to the site! Generally videos don't work well in the critique forums, because there's not much to critique. We mostly need the text. As it stands, I'm going to move this to a forum more in keeping with videos, and encourage you to bring the text back to us in an appropriate forum.
Nice to have you here.
Best,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson