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02-23-2013, 11:53 PM

Strong and apt imagery! Smile

I really like the way you divided the poem up. Just not sure why there's a picture of a cat.

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< the refrigerator > - by rayheinrich - 02-23-2013, 11:15 PM

RE: < the refrigerator > - by brandontoh - 02-23-2013, 11:53 PM

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