[End Note]

[hobbit86]

I find this incredibly hard to read as a poem...no seperate lines/stanzas...it's just my personal opinion on poems, but I straight away don't read poems like this because it puts me off...I see you have used rhyme...so why not make this look like a poem?

"Words inside of words, I fool you not,
Only a few can view the plot.
Numeral four is etched in my stone;
Only ten days left to carve them alone."