02-22-2013, 02:50 PM
Hi tectak,
Thank you for the comments. I appreciated them very much. My style as of late has veered towards what some have called "postmodern." You're right -- it is very minimalistic and austere, but that's also what I was aiming for, expressing a picture clearly, precisely, each word there because it is necessary. Perhaps this is not the best way to write, but I have found that I tend to be too verbose when I try to give my poetry room to breathe. My next poem will hopefully be less minimalistic, but I don't think deserving of the serious critique forum.
Thank you for the comments. I appreciated them very much. My style as of late has veered towards what some have called "postmodern." You're right -- it is very minimalistic and austere, but that's also what I was aiming for, expressing a picture clearly, precisely, each word there because it is necessary. Perhaps this is not the best way to write, but I have found that I tend to be too verbose when I try to give my poetry room to breathe. My next poem will hopefully be less minimalistic, but I don't think deserving of the serious critique forum.