a likely story.

[tectak]

and he loves me while i you
and you love her,
but she left you and
you me.

Apposite. This needs nothing adding or taking away. Does what it says on the tin and covers me in one coat. There is a captured adolescence in the language used and though I may baulk at the small "i" I dare not suggest it is a typo in case it has some teen-talk to which I am no longer privy
I reminds me of:
Said him to me,"Is that you?"
Said I,"Who?"
Said he,"You."
Said I, "No."
Said he, "My,
It's awfie' like you."

Scottish mother poem.
Best,
well done,
tectak