02-21-2013, 04:33 PM
Well, my thought is to the Age; Being more wise and mature writing this poem. Age gives the poem more dimension in effect how you can feel and tell the story line of the poem. In Summation, Only the mature and those with many life lessons could say it more Brilliantly!!!!
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Hi Angela, not quite sure I understand your reply, are you suggesting I'm twenty one and would be able to write this much better were I 60? If so I'm flattered, I am in fact a week shy of fifty eight and have had more experience of the joys of love and pain in the last thirteen years than most people get in a lifetime. Thank you reading and taking the time to comment, much appreciated
Smiffy
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Hi Angela, not quite sure I understand your reply, are you suggesting I'm twenty one and would be able to write this much better were I 60? If so I'm flattered, I am in fact a week shy of fifty eight and have had more experience of the joys of love and pain in the last thirteen years than most people get in a lifetime. Thank you reading and taking the time to comment, much appreciated
Smiffy
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