02-21-2013, 11:44 AM
Hi there!
My favorite has to be S1. I loved "blue perfumes" and L3 is very cool!
I think the last line of both the 2nd and 3rd Stanzas are weak. I like the last line in S1 because I think it reveals something interesting, I think the others don't.
Just my opinions, as a disclaimer - I am pretty new to poetry, so take this info as you choose.
Thanks for the read
My favorite has to be S1. I loved "blue perfumes" and L3 is very cool!
I think the last line of both the 2nd and 3rd Stanzas are weak. I like the last line in S1 because I think it reveals something interesting, I think the others don't.
Just my opinions, as a disclaimer - I am pretty new to poetry, so take this info as you choose.
Thanks for the read