02-21-2013, 10:56 AM
As people expect to find poetry on Christmas cards, I think it a quite legitimate thing to do. Perhaps it need not be as trite as it usually is, but I doubt many people would want to open their post, only to find some v dense material challenging their mince-pied, and inebriated brains.
There are numerous improvements to your piece, I think, but it's for fun, so I'lll let someone else do the donkey-work.
There are numerous improvements to your piece, I think, but it's for fun, so I'lll let someone else do the donkey-work.

