02-20-2013, 09:07 AM
(02-20-2013, 06:30 AM)tectak Wrote:this makes me giggle.(02-19-2013, 10:37 PM)Sonata Wrote: Hah, ty for your post. Fun thing is, you completely misunderstood this poem - it seems like you are use to hear GOOD things and then you think of good when you start reading but this is actually a critique, a cry for help and a hope in at least a small bit of good within people. Don't tell me that I didn't write it the way that people can understand it, I think I've shown this to every single english professor I know, and I know many and they did actually understand it.Off coarse...you are wright...scilly me. How cood I have bean so stewpid? My sincear retregs. What is a metaphore, buy the whey?
Now, ofcourse I will explain it to you, because I have no idea if you read this the right way, or just watched for a second and just figured, okay he is a fox, he is a god, he is a fox, who is he? And you obviously have no idea what a metaphore is. Sorry, but this is true, I'm not trying to offend you. And dear god I have no idea have you read the title at all, this is something that the fox had seen, every I in this poem is that fox, and It represents a Man/men I didn't use him/them because I was talking about a creature, a creature who rises in the first stanza, a small fox watches it as its God tho she is confused by it, because that Man who is suppose to be its God is actually a beast, a feast represents people's urge to take, rage, envy, kill... And yearn was used in a negative form. The fox is watching through the fern (watching men growe) I have no idea how you managed to misunderstand that but okay.
Second and third stanza talk about people growing, but not growing better, growing same - remaining savage beasts. "Great King of the Pith" was used as I talked before for you to see that fox's God is actually that Man, that beast. I used Pith instead of "the world" because I wanted to say that that Man is a God too all, it's a quintessence. Whole third stanza is in a negative form.
And finally in fourth stanza hopes grow when a man - the beast smiles - a trace of humanity in his long lost eyes (eye cracks) and the fox realizes that maybe we will be saved.
Breast and good buy,
taktoc
I'll be there in a minute.


