I'm a complete beginner! This is my first ever poem!
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I think you misunderstand me , I have no problem with the words you use, maybe it is me but I found nothing to connect me with your poem, for me it was cold and passionless. If you had concentrated more on the positive nature of my final sentence you might have seen that, still hoping to read more from you
Smif
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RE: I'm a complete beginner! This is my first ever poem! - by Smiffy - 02-20-2013, 08:11 AM



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