02-20-2013, 05:50 AM
Hi Graemsay,
I am fairly new to poetry, so I'm sorry I won't have a very detailed criticism. I did enjoy your poem. I agree with Leann that it leaves me wanting more. Maybe use this as a starting point and continue with another stanza. Otherwise, I found the simpleness to be sweet but also sort of desperate.
Thanks
I am fairly new to poetry, so I'm sorry I won't have a very detailed criticism. I did enjoy your poem. I agree with Leann that it leaves me wanting more. Maybe use this as a starting point and continue with another stanza. Otherwise, I found the simpleness to be sweet but also sort of desperate.
Thanks