Pending Judgment

[Leanne]

Hobbit has given you good advice, both on the poem and on life in general. The second line probably needs to go entirely, the poem is stronger without it. Otherwise -- it's probably fair to say that everyone here has felt a similar pressure at some point, which is even worse if you've got high expectations of yourself (and there's nothing wrong with that!). Aim high, but you don't always get there with just one step. Sometimes it's the long way round, but there's such great scenery on that route it's worth the trip!

And news for you -- we already think you're a weirdo