02-17-2013, 09:48 PM
the edit is great. and 'war zone' is one of my favorite phrases in the english language so it is nice for me to read it in a poem.
did you mean 'suggest'? unless you are using 'some' as a singular, in which case, pretty cool [although, to make it clear and not look like a mistake maybe capitalize the 's' - just a 'suggestion']
did you mean 'suggest'? unless you are using 'some' as a singular, in which case, pretty cool [although, to make it clear and not look like a mistake maybe capitalize the 's' - just a 'suggestion']