Conversation With the Magician’s Rabbit (revision)

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Conversation With the Magician’s Rabbit (revision)

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02-17-2013, 02:19 PM

I do like the inversion of those first few lines... and I'm pleased you went with the H line Smile

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Conversation With the Magician’s Rabbit (revision) - by Todd - 02-15-2013, 01:33 PM

RE: Conversation With the Magician’s Rabbit - by billy - 02-15-2013, 04:40 PM

RE: Conversation With the Magician’s Rabbit - by PoetryAndPhysics - 02-16-2013, 01:28 AM

RE: Conversation With the Magician’s Rabbit - by Leanne - 02-16-2013, 04:04 AM

RE: Conversation With the Magician’s Rabbit - by heslopian - 02-16-2013, 04:38 AM

RE: Conversation With the Magician’s Rabbit - by Todd - 02-17-2013, 01:05 PM

RE: Conversation With the Magician’s Rabbit (revision) - by Leanne - 02-17-2013, 02:19 PM

RE: Conversation With the Magician’s Rabbit (revision) - by Todd - 02-17-2013, 02:23 PM

RE: Conversation With the Magician’s Rabbit (revision) - by shemthepenman - 02-17-2013, 10:19 PM

RE: Conversation With the Magician’s Rabbit (revision) - by Todd - 02-17-2013, 11:08 PM

RE: Conversation With the Magician’s Rabbit (revision) - by tectak - 02-18-2013, 05:03 PM

RE: Conversation With the Magician’s Rabbit (revision) - by Todd - 02-20-2013, 06:21 AM

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