Hey all, thank you for the great comments.
Billy: Interesting idea on reversing those lines in S1. I have some ideas on the heat death strophe. I appreciate the feedback. Thanks
Gary: I liked your read on cold silk. I'll consider the cat ideas. Thanks for the read and thoughts.
Leanne: I love the stream of consciousness. I will add child's (that's perfect). I'll think about the rabbit in the box. Hell I could tie the sawing in half thing with the box. That might be a good riff on schrodinger. Nice Texas comment.
Jack: Some cool thoughts and comments. Again, I'm going to address the heat death one, thanks for weighing in. Much appreciated.
Well here's the first edit.
Billy: Interesting idea on reversing those lines in S1. I have some ideas on the heat death strophe. I appreciate the feedback. Thanks
Gary: I liked your read on cold silk. I'll consider the cat ideas. Thanks for the read and thoughts.
Leanne: I love the stream of consciousness. I will add child's (that's perfect). I'll think about the rabbit in the box. Hell I could tie the sawing in half thing with the box. That might be a good riff on schrodinger. Nice Texas comment.
Jack: Some cool thoughts and comments. Again, I'm going to address the heat death one, thanks for weighing in. Much appreciated.
Well here's the first edit.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson