Grass Cutting In a Vienna Park
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hi Bill
a sad poem, it all works for me apart from the last line which feels unnecessary.
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Grass Cutting In a Vienna Park - by Smiffy - 02-14-2013, 08:37 AM
RE: Grass Cutting In a Vienna Park - by hobbit86 - 02-17-2013, 06:11 AM
RE: Grass Cutting In a Vienna Park - by billy - 02-17-2013, 06:18 AM
RE: Grass Cutting In a Vienna Park - by abu nuwas - 02-17-2013, 09:55 AM



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