Paper Cut Melodrama

[billy]

hi gary

i mentions a few things but noting bigger than a nit, maybe the 1st line thing the images are great. i'm sure they make everyone else as well as me remember what a good paper cut feels like. i had to look up Pleistocene but i'm dumb so that's no biggy :0

thanks for the read.

Ouch! A paper cut! is 'a paper cut" needed?
Guillotined by printer parchment! i like the drama, but is Guillotined, the right word?
Canyons of skin, carved by a crimson river, this is an excellent image that blows the cut to disproportionate size
oversee numbness advance like Pleistocene glaciers.
Fingers curl and plead for iced tap water. is 'for iced tap water needed?leave something for us to imagine
Devils radiate up my nervous system, whispering intrigue
of a prince bested by a commoner’s breadknife.
Talk turns to riven skies, to earthquakes,
to cracks in the Earth’s crust.
Plans drawn up to empty the bars of alcohol,
to build defense shields of gauze and cotton balls,
fall to wanton mobs of maniacs and clowns.
As ascetics run rampant with flagellating birch rods, i see myself so easily
as ancient statues crumple to hails of rocket fire,
as everyone clasps hands in a final plea for grace,
all seems lost.
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Tranquility always comes with a new day’s retrospect. not sure you need this line, just leave us hanging as to your pain.