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[schmitler]

Thought I'de try and give you some feedback. I fear I may have exposed myself as too much of a newbie from my first thread, so I feel rather fraudulent right now! I agree with the above statement that it comes across as rather abstract, however thats what I loved about it. For me poetry (or art of any kind) should spark the imagination and make you think, and for me, your poem did both.