02-16-2013, 11:23 AM
Thanks for the feedback jormungandr! Point taken and processed 
I suppose I just love to use what I perceive to be, less boring and obvious words to express myself, but I suppose (taking your point into consideration) it could almost alienate the reader or come across as tedious or pretentious (I would like to say that I didn't once use a thesaurus haha). My favorite poet is Ginsberg and I love the way he writes, with his lavish and expressive vocabulary. Maybe for my next one I should tone down the vocab a bit.
I suppose I just love to use what I perceive to be, less boring and obvious words to express myself, but I suppose (taking your point into consideration) it could almost alienate the reader or come across as tedious or pretentious (I would like to say that I didn't once use a thesaurus haha). My favorite poet is Ginsberg and I love the way he writes, with his lavish and expressive vocabulary. Maybe for my next one I should tone down the vocab a bit.