02-16-2013, 10:17 AM
So this is my first poem I've ever written. I went for a non rhyming format, aiming for a beat poem-ish vibe. Any thoughts would be appreciated 
"Elusivity"
Are these the ululating, atavistic moans of desire I've craved since adolescence?
Knawing, gnarling and crippling every sense of what is perceived to be unfeigned?
Strange how such a position delivers instant gratification yet is punctuated with insurmountable uncertainty.
Lost in natural confusion of rhythm, joy is there somewhere, screaming to be released.
Eyes tantalized by what's laid before them, and senses shot from the electricity of connection.
Each one devouring the other in trance-like vigor, scratching, clawing and biting.
Wolves would recoil with feverish discomfort.
Are these the cries of unquestionable, uncontrollable, arresting divinity?
"Elusivity"
Are these the ululating, atavistic moans of desire I've craved since adolescence?
Knawing, gnarling and crippling every sense of what is perceived to be unfeigned?
Strange how such a position delivers instant gratification yet is punctuated with insurmountable uncertainty.
Lost in natural confusion of rhythm, joy is there somewhere, screaming to be released.
Eyes tantalized by what's laid before them, and senses shot from the electricity of connection.
Each one devouring the other in trance-like vigor, scratching, clawing and biting.
Wolves would recoil with feverish discomfort.
Are these the cries of unquestionable, uncontrollable, arresting divinity?