02-16-2013, 01:28 AM
Agree, enjoyed the read.
Appreciated the Schrodinger’s Cat reference. Perhaps you could make it in two lines and not three? Saying the cat’s in two states might suffice (or just that it’s waiting for quantum certainty, or something like that).
I read “cold silk” together in S4, picturing frigid fibers filling a void, that’s also brimmed with heat death. I’m temped to ask whether this is the correct interpretation, though I’m also content with reading the poem without understanding parts of it.
Nice ending. There IS no hat! It’s all been a lie! Anywhoo, think that’s all for now..
Appreciated the Schrodinger’s Cat reference. Perhaps you could make it in two lines and not three? Saying the cat’s in two states might suffice (or just that it’s waiting for quantum certainty, or something like that).
I read “cold silk” together in S4, picturing frigid fibers filling a void, that’s also brimmed with heat death. I’m temped to ask whether this is the correct interpretation, though I’m also content with reading the poem without understanding parts of it.
Nice ending. There IS no hat! It’s all been a lie! Anywhoo, think that’s all for now..