02-15-2013, 03:45 AM
To live is to feel the breath of emotion upon your cheek
To hear a whisper of truth within your ear.
It gently caresses your dreams into awakening
It holds your hand as you cross the river of uncertainty.
Invisible Shadows 2012
I'm stuck for a title for this...
When I wrote this I'd intended a proper poem of a few stanzas...but it just felt like everything I needed to say was said in those 4 lines...it'd be nice to make it a proper length poem, but just can't think how to expand it....is it better short, would it spoil it to add to it? or is it missing something?
it's definately missing a title...so that'd be good
To hear a whisper of truth within your ear.
It gently caresses your dreams into awakening
It holds your hand as you cross the river of uncertainty.
Invisible Shadows 2012
I'm stuck for a title for this...
When I wrote this I'd intended a proper poem of a few stanzas...but it just felt like everything I needed to say was said in those 4 lines...it'd be nice to make it a proper length poem, but just can't think how to expand it....is it better short, would it spoil it to add to it? or is it missing something?
it's definately missing a title...so that'd be good
"We are the music makers
And we are the dreamers of dreams
Wandering by lone sea breakers
And sitting by desolate streams" ~ Arthur O'Shaughnessy
http://invisibleshadows86.blogspot.co.uk/
My journey
And we are the dreamers of dreams
Wandering by lone sea breakers
And sitting by desolate streams" ~ Arthur O'Shaughnessy
http://invisibleshadows86.blogspot.co.uk/
My journey