02-14-2013, 09:03 PM
My three year old would appreciate this poem, more for the topic than the construction, but he is in full agreement with Peppa Pig on jumping in muddy puddles. I liked your use of Scylla to give a sense of depth and "danger". Your ending also made this a clever piece.
Welcome to the site!
Welcome to the site!
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
