My First Ever Haiku

[Jae Mc Donnell]

That's really great. Even though it's a cold image, I get a real warm feeling, as in warm fire, fall asleep.
But on my last haiku I was told you shouldn't use adjectives. So maybe change out sleepy for sleeping maybe or drifting might work

Pristine snow blanket
Veils the field a sleepy hue --
The world falls asleep
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