02-13-2013, 04:37 PM
I liked it. Knowing the concept, I can understand that title insomnia or at least come to my own assertions. Night time would be the only time she would have to dwell on the issue, for in the day time she must maintain a facade (Hence the Make-up). I like the structure of the poem, it reads very scattered brained and disjointed, which adds to the mood and theme of the piece. One the other hand I do feel that it is a little too long, but its not that big of an issue.