02-13-2013, 12:59 PM
Thanks Todd, hobbit! =) I've edited it once again. For now I think I'll keep it that way. =D Thanks for the feedback and for reading it! =D
Well I just thought of how it feels to be alone in a station and sitting there after the last train leaves. I thought of how the whole mood will be like, and just put it down on paper. It's about loneliness and detachment from others. This was a piece that I written during my poetry chess game with Todd, so I was mainly trying to think of something to write for my move. So well, I guess I was feeling rather... normal when this was written? It's just a simple poem that came from a spark of inspiration.
Well I just thought of how it feels to be alone in a station and sitting there after the last train leaves. I thought of how the whole mood will be like, and just put it down on paper. It's about loneliness and detachment from others. This was a piece that I written during my poetry chess game with Todd, so I was mainly trying to think of something to write for my move. So well, I guess I was feeling rather... normal when this was written? It's just a simple poem that came from a spark of inspiration.
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