Fading

[hobbit86]

Straight off I like this poem, the use of rhyme (I'm a sucker for rhyme when it isn't cheesy!), but my only problem, and it's just they way I've grown up...there's a lack of capital letters! fine to start off the line without, but the use of 'i' instead of 'I' just puts me off a bit...otherwise great poem. Easy to read, and to understand and get a sense of the poets mood.