A Lover's Suicide
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This poem really pulled alot of emotion out of me. I like how you question the person (who committed suicide?). I enjoyed the imagery but believe the poem would benefit from a little more of it. :-)
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A Lover's Suicide - by Kreative - 02-10-2013, 02:01 AM
RE: A Lover's Suicide - by cidermaid - 02-10-2013, 07:11 AM
RE: A Lover's Suicide - by billy - 02-12-2013, 04:32 PM
RE: A Lover's Suicide - by nothing_good16 - 02-12-2013, 10:05 PM



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